Drowning

A poem about sorrow

I am drowning in a sea of sorrow,

the current dragging me down to the abyss,

I scream as the water fills my lungs,

got no air left to breathe,

the pressure crushing me,

sinking deeper into the depths,

lost forever in the frozen void 

Reviews

[misha]

This is a powerful write. Very eerie and intruiging. Great job!