Images (Dedicated to INTUITUS)

Images (Dedicated to INTUITUS)

A Poem by Mercury Rising
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for my Spencer

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Images of you

Still play across my mind

Tho’ I try to make other friends

Loneliness is all I find.

 

There’s emptiness inside

Like my heart has got the flu

The God-shaped hole is filled

But not the one that’s shaped like you.

 

We were not good for each other

And from your state I fled

But why is it I still love you

And can’t get you out of my head?

 

I love the man I thought you were

The one you try to be

That’s why I’m jealous of her --

She has who used to love me.



Special message to S.   You may think my love is a false pretense to be ignored, but this I state as the absolute TRUTH UNWAVERED:


I have been, and always shall be YOUR FRIEND.

© 2014 Mercury Rising


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A splendid read and write...Bravo.............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mercury Rising

10 Years Ago

Thank you. It was written with a former bf in mind. We are both writers on here, who have each other.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)...............
Betrayal is hard and you convey this well. Very good read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mercury Rising

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I don't try to be really good on here; I just express my heart and soul. It's a kind of t.. read more
FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

Enjoy work and writing is therapeutic!
oozing with sadness...and that emptiness...i have felt that time and again...

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mercury Rising

10 Years Ago

Sadness, I agree, but it will get better. Thanks for the review! Hang tight- I'll be reviewing some .. read more

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Mercury Rising
Mercury Rising

Wild-n-Windy, IL



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Hi! Welcome to my corner of the WritersCafe world! The name I write under is Sara (pronounced 'Zarra') Mercury, but my friends call me 'Susie'. I am 44 years of age and have been writing since I w.. more..

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