BEASTS

Why glorify these shamefull monsters, Lets cut flesh from them, so pretty !

Lets make a final pact today, for
These humans made for calamity.
Insane, lustily burning desires, they
Are some kind of rare species.
Put these thorny bounds on them,
Lest they be now fully recieved.
Lets make a terrifying example today,
I wish for them a tortured release.
Their insides should be burned alive,
Lets steal their manhood publically.
Why are such monsters even allowed,
To roam around, smiling freely.
Dig into their shameless eyes,
Make holes in them, so pretty!
Why do you show death to them,
Lets terrify them by every means.
Make such an impact today,
To clear out these pedophilic beasts.
Dont show me their smug looling faces,
I want to watch them crying insanely.
Their dark desires pushed on them,
Even then will I not be relieved.
Lets start a beginning to an end,
For these legions of monsters, Please!
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Will I ever see relief?
No longer innocent eyes treated horifically!

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

The speaker could be either an avenging angel or a serial killer. I wonder who he is talking to.

[Relic]

I'm sure there is a part of all of us that can relate to your feelings whenever we see the news about monsters such as the one you write about. The world can be a place with no mercy. That's sad to say but it's true.

[Stephanie M]

I think that we need to be bring back the inquisition just for sick perverts like that. Well written!

[Mikku]

Such people should be punished publicly. I read about it and was really disgusted. You are dead right in calling them beasts.

[Davidgeo]

'Lustly' is not a word... but lustily sure is.

Also, your message is one that should not be condoned. It's basically a call for perpetual misery. "never trust those within whom the impulse to punish is powerful" F Nietzsche.

In that poem I would argue that YOU are the beast and completely driven by anger and vengeance.... isn't 'wrath' one of the seven deadly sins?

[Raghib]

That word was a typo. Thank you for pointing it out.
And I am sorry but we cannot remain as humans to fight such cases of inhumanity. I live in this country and everyday i see such cases revolving around. Its like people are doing it for fun because they know there will be no punishment.
How fo you intend to fight such 'humans'?
When evil starts destroying the world that you live in, will you have the will to fight evil with evil, or will you remain steadfast to your righteous ways even if it means giving in to evil?
I may be the beast today for demanding such a thing, and not many would acknowledge the way of justice that I believe in. But this world does not remain a battleground for humans. We have evolved. Evolved into psychopathic monsters.
Maybe I am wrong. But I believe in reality rather than morales!

[Davidgeo]

I'm sure it was a typo, that s**t tends to happen.

The rest of your response is borderline incoherent.

Stop trying so hard and be honestly and simply direct. The word salad approach does you no favors.

Until then, we don't really have anything further to talk about.

[wordman]

they belong to satan,and i agree,cut it off

[Raghib]

Yup. Thats right

[Najam Us Saher]

Reading about such issues makes me feel depressed, such heinous crimes are being committed and no deserving punishment is given adds more to my melancholy. Every person feels unrest in their souls like they want to get up and do something, calm are those who have power and yet are not doing anything.

[Raghib]

Thats true

[¿]

Sorry for including but this reminds the story of recent "Asifa" case in India.
But it's just not about asifa, no wonder how many beasts are tormenting harshly so many Asifas, snatching lives, being brutal more than their can be!!
Truly, the blood dripping from their cut out flesh is pretty!!!

[Raghib]

Thats correct. That is why i have written this keeping in mind that it is a general thing

[Raghib]

This is a writing focussed on an event occured in my country. Ashamed of such lustful acts, named rapes, I write this as a desire to torture these smiling beasts.
I cannot change the past, but I can be a voice for the future. Lets force such a terrorizing punishment that no other person keeps a wish to foster such desires.
Lets make a terrifying example today !

[Arya]

When I first heard about the incident I was so disgusted with literally everything here and I was angry too and I really wanted them to pay for it, maybe your poem is harsh but then, so is reality.I can understand your desire to fight back.