When I Think of Home

When I Think of Home

A Poem by Raging.Skies

When I think of 'home' I think of cherry pies
When I think of 'home' I think of mulberry trees
When I think of 'home' I think of butterflies
When I think of 'home' I think of bumble bees

When I think of 'home' I think of hummingbirds
When I think of 'home' I think of sun brewed tea
When I think of 'home' I think of morning walks
When I think of 'home' I think of Grandma and me

When I think of 'home' I think of hidden trails
When I think of 'home' I think of lullabies
When I think of 'home' I think of signs of spring
When I think of 'home' I think of pumpkin pies

When I think of 'home' I think of bedtime stories
When I think of 'home' I think of I think of honeysuckle
When I think of 'home' I think of roses blooming
When I think of 'home' I can't help but chuckle

Because when I think of 'home' I think Heaven
When I think of 'home' I think of all that's kind
When I think of 'home' I think of dancing
When I think of 'home' Grandma comes to mind

© 2010 Raging.Skies


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Raging.Skies
I wrote this poem when I was 12, I understand that it's not the best.

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I wrote this poem when I was 12 lol I've gotten much better since. Read "Cupid's Lesson"

Posted 10 Years Ago


A good poem. Not bad at all. But it is super repetitive. True the title is "When I Think Of Home" but you don't have to repeat it through all 5 stanzas. If that's your style then just ignore that. Other than that minor setback I enjoyed it very much. I can feel all the love you have for your home. Like I said a great poem over all.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2010
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Raging.Skies

Dayton, OH



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