What hurts the most in life?

What hurts the most in life?

A Story by Rahul Bakolia
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Today I came across a incident which I want to share with you all.

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They used to share everything between them; both their happiness and pains.

They both were a wonderful couple. But, unfortunately, it came to an end.

Due to certain reasons, they got separated with each other and married someone else.

Even though their love was true, they still had to move on in their life. Both of them got busy in their life.

Years later, they found their old, long lost conversations on WhatsApp which made their eyes teary.

Question: What hurts the most?

Answer: When you find an old conversation between you and someone you don’t talk to anymore.


One more.

They used to share everything between them; both their happiness and pains.

They both were a wonderful couple. But, unfortunately, it came to an end.

Due to certain reasons, they got separated with each other.

Even though her love for him was true, the guy blamed the girl for their break up.

To seek revenge, he leaked their intimate pics online to which the girl was considered as a ‘s**t’ by everyone.

Question: What hurts the most?

Answer: Getting hurt by the person you explained your pain to.

© 2019 Rahul Bakolia


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Author's Note

Rahul Bakolia
Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

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You have written about two scenarios here which caused pain. I understand them both, but the second one involves a breach of trust, clearly from someone seeking revenge for a failed relationship. That would cause her immense pain, but would also show him up to be the absolute pits for what he did. Good luck with your studies. I enjoyed this post.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thank you son much ma'am. Btw exams got over.



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Indeed, betrayal of the type described here is devastatingly painful. But it occurs. Therefore, be careful with whom you share your secrets.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is basically what happened to me only we were only best friends and I was the girl he blamed for the breakup after he asked for nudes to which I said not happening. Brilliant work keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

I am sorry for that. Now stay happy 😊. Good morning
Ace Jaxon

1 Year Ago

It's night where I'm at, but I prefer morning so Good Morning. :) I will try my hardest to be happy .. read more
Sad scenarios. Relatable.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lovely write. I can relate to your words in a personal way. So true...it does hurt, getting hurt by someone you loved and trusted the most, as well as looking back at past conversations between you and the one you loved. Thank you for sharing this. I needed this in a way :)
-Angela

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much ma'am for your kind words.
BTW you're looking beautiful in profile picture .. read more
A.G.

1 Year Ago

Your welcome lovely (: and thanks lol
I really don't know what does a relationship means but I knew it well that this is a saddest story of two friends right . Thanx writing this RB bro I like it . Keep writing ((smiles )) 😊😊😊😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Relationship k baare m janna bhi mat, cuz
*Sbka kat ta hai*
Translation - "You'll fin.. read more
Taniska  😊😊

1 Year Ago

Thanx bro . And I also don't wanna know about it cause I am not at your age right bro . *Smiles * �.. read more
This raises loads of issues, including the end of a relationship and revenge material. I like poets who look at real issues, so a good write, well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much sir for reading.
You have picked two scenarios that almost anyone can relate to & understand. The first one does not strike me as being something that "hurts the most" . . . for me, it would be a melancholy inconvenience. If you have truly moved on, it's easy to embrace loves that are no longer in the picture. The second scenario is definitely more provocative, since it was an act of vengeance. In this case, I feel you could have done more to SHOW instead of tell. When something this harsh happens, especially being such a visual medium as sharing photos online, you could describe the moment she sees her own personal photos on a public forum. Just that one scene. Draw it out. Show the pain. Here you are relying too much on how your audience will be able to relate to what you have NOT actually shown us (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your suggestion. Thanks for Reading.
when you spend so many times twisting your arms trying to yank knifes from your back, their comes a time when its time to stop trying to pull them out and just except the pain.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

This is epic brother 😂😂😂😂
You have written about two scenarios here which caused pain. I understand them both, but the second one involves a breach of trust, clearly from someone seeking revenge for a failed relationship. That would cause her immense pain, but would also show him up to be the absolute pits for what he did. Good luck with your studies. I enjoyed this post.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thank you son much ma'am. Btw exams got over.
Sorry writerscafe members for not being able to review and read your stories. As Exam process shackled my confidence and Time and buried it in Mariana Trench.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 17, 2019
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