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A Story by Rahul Bakolia
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That awkward moment.

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*Me replying to the reviews on my writings*

Ananjaya Das: Wow! What a story Rahul. Totally loved it. I can't stop laughing. 

Me: Thank you Ananjay :)

Ananjaya Das: Brother, it’s Ananjay‘a’

Me: Oops, sorry :-!


Arushi Mullick: Well written Rahul. This one is one of the best stories of yours. 

Me: Thanks a lot Ayushi.

Arushi Mullick: You’re welcome. And by the way, it’s A‘r’ushi :D

Me: Ohh. I’m so sorry Arushi :-


*Me now thinks that no need of writing names while replying*

Ruju Gorai: Well written poem. Very Romentic and funny . 

Me: Thank you brother :)

Ruju Gorai: Sir, I’m a girl.

Me: Ummm… Sorry :’(


*Me becoming more careful*

Yash: Awesome story man!

Inner me: Name suggests like a guy. Still, lemme check his profile.

*Checked the profile but still had no idea*

*Trusting my instincts*

Me: Thank you brother :)

Yash: Sir, I’m not a guy.

Me: Ohh. So sorry sister :)

Yash: Sir, I’m neither a girl too.

(All images source: Google)


- Rahul Bakolia 

© 2019 Rahul Bakolia


Author's Note

Rahul Bakolia
Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

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You're an alien.
😆
Funny

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Rahul Bakolia

2 Months Ago

This is one of the best and funniest complement I've ever got so far
Light and Ashes

2 Months Ago

Lol 😆 I do what I can.
haha ha loved this. yes Im happy to review but sometimes I cannot make the quota of words so like the review from Craig, below, I add in a line or dots......... but that doesnt mean to say I dont like your poem I do!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is hilarious!
It won't let me post without at least 20 characters so I added this line.

Posted 1 Year Ago


In these times of fluid sexuality, this one is not so far out.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Loved this, full of humour,and it shows you have a great feeling for comedy. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is one of your best & funniest that I've read so far. This is really hilarious. It's not just revealing as to your hesitation about answering reviews, but it also sounds like a spoof on how all the gender variations these days make it impossible to narrow things down to male & female! This is nicely balanced all the way. Each installment perfectly rendered in its own picture, plus contributing to the whole as a fun narrative! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lol...there is no winning is there!!!! I feel your pain, brotha, sistah, mistah, nana, ye of no gender identity, not matter what you are like family to me...lol.!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Ha ha... Thank you so much sir for reading. 😊😊😊
Haha, what the fun! 😀.....
Rastogi has nailed it , though. 😂



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Haha, you know about him.
Thanks for the review sister. 😊😊😊
Damn funny one!😂😂😂. Loved your sarcastic write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thanks sir. 😊😊😊😁
Yes Sir, brother this was funny. Funny because it's true.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rahul Bakolia

1 Year Ago

Thanks ma'am 😊 😊 😊

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Added on April 24, 2019
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About me? The lonely guy you just ignored because of his weird antics (talking to himself, poker face, cuddling stray animals, insure body language, smiling without any reason, blank stare, scanning.. more..

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