Idk?

Idk?

A Poem by RainDancer1997

   Love is like a beat to your guitar

  All you have to do is play it with your heart

© 2013 RainDancer1997


Author's Note

RainDancer1997
Ok me and my sister came up with that when we were seven and eight lol. I wanna add to it and play and sing it to her for her birthday:)! I need help for more lyrics does anyone have any ideas? Comment below if so:) Thanks guys!!!

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That is pretty beautiful for a couplet. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aw! this is very sweet! I'm not really sure what to add. I write song lyrics for my story, but I don't think I'm that great at it :D

Besides anything I can think of is too sensual and wouldn't be good to play to your sister XD

Off to a good start though!

Posted 6 Years Ago


...and the strings become our smiles
as their music fills our dreams with life.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

6 Years Ago

I like that thanks:-)
Chris

6 Years Ago

welcome...
sweet that you want to do that for your sister.
Unfortunately cant help you here, im a good poet but i cant write songs for s**t.
But good luck coming up with something :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

haha thanks:)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Your most welcome :)
Something like the guitar is trying to tell the person that is playing it the following words

_

take my hand without fear
kiss me and do not look down
as long as we live
as if it were eternal

_

Thank you, good luck at school.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

Thanks that's great:)!

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RainDancer1997
RainDancer1997

ragland, AL



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I'm from a small town in Alabama and I love skateboards and any type of rock music. I love to talk to anyone, and I hope ya'll like my writings:)! MY fav music:) Sleeping with Sirens .. more..

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