The Heart Broken Cycle

The Heart Broken Cycle

A Poem by RainDancer1997

 

 

      Today was another lie

 

      So easy, yet so wrong

 

     Wishing I could spread my wings and fly

 

      Listening to the usual sad songs

 

      Thought I could trust him, but yet that was a mistake

 

      Hit by his betrayal, back on the floor I go

 

     Wondering how much more pounding my heart can possibly take

 

      Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw

 

      I know I'll get over him, one day at least

 

      But for now I'll cry tears he doesn't disserve

 

      To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

 

      Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves

 

      Moving on seems to be the hardest part

 

      Watching a fake love fade to black

 

      It truly takes a piece of my soul and my heart

 

      This cycle leaves me broken and cracked

 

    

 

      

 

     

© 2013 RainDancer1997


Author's Note

RainDancer1997
This is to all who are going through this, bc ik I am:(

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To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves


maybe sometimes it just appears that way, but people still hurt when they leave one another.. they just dont want to let up.. i know, its silly isnt it..

a nice write thank you for sharing it with us
Antonio :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sorry about what sounds like a break up! Never fun :(

But for what it's worth, this was an EXCELLENT poem that really did a great job at captivating the emotions. Really, the best poetry is produced from real life, so it's no shocker that it was a great poem.

Hope you get over him quick! No guy is worth dwelling over in high school; we are all idiots ;) Hahaha

Posted 10 Years Ago


To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves


maybe sometimes it just appears that way, but people still hurt when they leave one another.. they just dont want to let up.. i know, its silly isnt it..

a nice write thank you for sharing it with us
Antonio :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy reading everything you write! Another great poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

Awww yayy:-)
To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast
Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves
Moving on seems to be the hardest part
Watching a fake love fade to black
It truly takes a piece of my soul and my heart
This cycle leaves me broken and cracked

a sad poem of love written nicely and it flows in.

Pray You get the Man of Your dreams.

best wishes







Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really do enjoy how your prom relates to real like situations that people go through every day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

I guess BC Its about what I really go through
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Describes what I've had to go through, definitely! I LOVE this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...first off this was beautiful. Especially the beautiful beast part. Also it's insane that you're pinned your feelings as well as my own. I My eyes once the reader can relate to the author it's a job well done!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How interesting and your bravenes to share your true feelings

"Its even sadder to think.
That when you tell someone.
The only thing they can think about is their own feelings.
Because the least some persons care about is someone else's problems. "

Well, I care, because I wouldn't want that happening to me and the way to avoid it is by helping you and giving you a hand to get up

"Everyone needs to see what they have right in front of them.
And I mean right in front of them, or its love that shall be lost.
And I won't be the one crying, I'll be the one holding your hand".

Your True Friend Anika

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breaking up is hard to do, so the song goes, I am guessing they knew what they were talking about.
I found the best way to get over it is find someone just a little prettier or in your case, maybe more handsome. And it helps if they treat you right. Find someone that likes poetry. It's a great start.

Enjoyed this poem. Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

That lyric fits it exactly
Trace

10 Years Ago

My x wife hates my new wife because she is so much prettier than her and the x cheated on me with a .. read more
RainDancer1997

10 Years Ago

I guess what goes around comes around
This piece touched my heart..I'm sorry you've been through such pain..I did..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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