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A Poem by Rainbow Ladybug

Slit my wrists ending my life

Letting go of tears held tight

Around my throught

My final thought

I wonder if he cared at all

 

© 2009 Rainbow Ladybug


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In the line "Around my throught" do you mean "throat"?
Regardless, this is a short but good poem. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on May 21, 2009

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Rainbow Ladybug
Rainbow Ladybug

Kingsville , TX



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