Chorus of Angels

Chorus of Angels

A Poem by Nicholas Antonio Young
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I was listening to some beautiful ambient sounds, and this is how I felt while listening to it.

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As if underneath a waterfall of sound

The chorus of angels' voices wash over me

All my senses vibrate and hum while my heart pounds

This I know, is what it means to be free


For but an earthly second in their light I flew

Yet I basked there for an eternity

I'm carried on breezes of sound as it blew all through

The angel's voices sing to me the truth of reality


My body becomes evanescence into the chorus

My mind melds with the music's waves

My soul submerges into this light filled ocean of Arcturus

Within the chorus of angels, is where I am truly saved

© 2013 Nicholas Antonio Young


Author's Note

Nicholas Antonio Young
These weren't lyrics for a song this time. I decided to try my hand at making just a regular poem. I hope you all like it. And sorry for the mistake on the fifth line. It was a typo, but I corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out everyone :)

I do not own the image posted with this song

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I really enjoyed this poem. =D This is just me being nit-picky but in line 6 I felt kind of awkward with the "for an eternity", and I think if it's just "for eternity" would make it flow nicer. But that's just my opinion. It's a really great poem, and keep up the good work! =3

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow, this was a brilliant piece :) truly beautiful! I love the imagery you described and the inner story you told. It's funny how simple sounds can inspire such a poem as this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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awesome..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truly inspiring. Wonderful use of words and the flow of the poem was absolutely exquisite! the description was surreal.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspirational

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really like the poem a lot. It had a good flow and made me feel, like, really peaceful and calm. I love the 11th line, it's my favorite out of the peom. Good job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is refreshing and peaceful. You've described it well C=

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write, made me feel heavenly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really liked reading this poem because it was soothing and it had a great imagery. The words and the tone went perfectly together. I don't think you need anything changed, so great job, and keep it up! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on April 7, 2012
Last Updated on August 27, 2013
Tags: Spiritual, Light, Philosophy, Music, Angels, Rebirth, Truth, Realization

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Nicholas Antonio Young
Nicholas Antonio Young

Nashville, TN



About
My name is Nick. I'm just another person in this world filled with thoughts and ideas with the desire to express. I love to read pretty much any form of literature, but my interests in actual writing .. more..

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