this kinda blue

this kinda blue

A Poem by Rain
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Just words with no place to go..

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i've been feeling empty lately
kinda out there all by myself
probably need to get me a thicker coat
put this old one here back up on the shelf
i really need to go somewhere
maybe to the library, maybe read a book
find me a new friend...someplace with a different look
getting too old to ramble...not sure what to do
sometimes think about her...when it's
this kinda blue
 
just don't see nothing headed my way
everyday pretty much the same
people start lookin all alike
everyone seems to have a game
all i got is a necklace from you
sometimes i think the whole city
feels this kinda blue
 
it's just an empty feelin
like this might be all i'll be
some nameless,faceless,no-body
living life aimlessly
i don't see the wind changin
not a whole lot left to do
just sometimes wonder
do you remember me, when it's  
this kinda blue
 
sat in the corner booth
of an old family diner
the waitress that took my order
reminded me a bit of you
coffee and toast
a false smile from the host
a drop of rain
does its lonely dance 
down a window pane
i sit alone in a booth for two
there's a sound to this kind of down
a lonely melody
to this kinda blue
 
 
 
 

© 2008 Rain


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I agree, this definately sounds like a song...

just am kinda curious
if she ever feels this kinda blue

yes it makes you wonder doesnt it.. You capture it well. That cloud that seems to hang only over your head when you are feeling this way... sigh

Posted 13 Years Ago


11 of 11 people found this review constructive.




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Man, I know how you feel. Been feeling this way for awhile, but I've been changing so much in my life these past few months that hopefully things won't seem so "blue". Good write even though the inspiration for it really sucks. Kudos.

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Nice write, even if it's blue. I like the progression of the various placements of 'blue' at the end of each section, then you move on. Trying to move on with your life inspite of your blues. Many people out there are going thru this, I wonder how many times we overlook them....
Kelly

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I've had that type of day before. It's nice to read someone turning it around into inspiration. That's a neat way to stick it to a bad day huh? I agree with a few of the other posters...it definitely sounds like a song. It's a pretty thought, that sadness sounds like a song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Welcome to the dark place, my friend. Don't stay there too long! It's not a happy place to be, but I do find that I'm the most creative when I'm there, so maybe it's a good thing?! : )

Peace,
Christel

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I agree, this definately sounds like a song...

just am kinda curious
if she ever feels this kinda blue

yes it makes you wonder doesnt it.. You capture it well. That cloud that seems to hang only over your head when you are feeling this way... sigh

Posted 13 Years Ago


11 of 11 people found this review constructive.

Very melancholy ... nicely written ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

very well written rain ,every one has his ups and downs ,i most of the time all in the blues,its a silly life ,thats why we feel like this,great words as usual

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

This is so cool, Rain...definitely reminded me of Dylan but with your own spin on things. You are NOT nameless, everyone's talkin at you, remember? LOL...loved this! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

wonderfully written, heartfelt write. I know the feeling too well, I feel this way some days. Nicely done, Rain I truly enjoy your words.


Rayne

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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this looks like it could be turned into a song, this is another great write by u my friend, i again thank u graciously for asking me to read your writings

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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