I feel like these are words that could have come straight from my heart. I feel so empty sometimes. There is a melancholy feeling to this poem that I love. Great write!
Rain, you have led a rich and colorful life, and what makes that so great is that you know how to put your stories into words so very well! You can write down what others can only vaguely remember. This poem has the feeling of a song, a longing, I can just hear it with music. Love it!
You really capture the whole feeling here, thinking of someone and maybe you are better off alone without them--but maybe not? You know you have to get on with life but it's hard. Your words here really brought the poem home....
"a false smile from the host drops of rain race down a window pane i sit alone in a booth for two there's a sound to this kind of down a lonely melody to this kinda blue"...an extremely beautiful sad poem. Lovely in many ways.
Beautifully touching poem. Most people have and will again, feel this kinda blue, but that doesn't mean anything when the person feeling it is you. You really got the feeling across here, of exactly that no hope, depressed feeling, what a great piece to read when I feel like this too, but nobody could ever feel my kinda blue...Nice words, sorta reassuring in a way.
Who is 'she?' Anyway, you will never be just another faceless and nameless person. You have made your mark. Your writing is eternal and so are you. I would not call you ordinary, neither are you a nobody!
I think you were having a bad day...that is all and we all have those, keep smiling Ray, this is unlike you...
Cheer up my friend,
Love to you and Sue and the family,
Helen :-)
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