Buried In The Nude

Buried In The Nude

A Poem by Raisins Badeaux
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A journey to the after-life.

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I closed my eyes and the world scattered
Buried in the nude
Nothing mattered

Through the earth, pulled down under
Constricted, blind
Torn asunder

Bias, bigotry; all decried
Emancipated, duplicated
Dragged to the other side.

© 2013 Raisins Badeaux


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I love the first two stanzas. Those two are cool.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not bad, and very evocative, but I feel like the ending needs some work. It doesn't seem to stand up to the buildup you presented in the first two stanzas, and it seems a little formulaic. You have a nice presentation and it's definitely worth reading, but I'd consider working on that last bit.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A real life nightmare.

Amazing concept.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 21, 2013
Last Updated on February 22, 2013
Tags: buried, burial, nude, naked, destitute, grave, death, earth, ghost, heaven, hell, afterlife, nightmare




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