Oh Zephyr

Oh Zephyr
As a merciful favour
To an awaiting soul
Drift this luscious savor
To half of my whole

Sundered by distance
Yet blended through hearts
Longing this fragrance
He is, on other end of world

Together, we rooted
These roses of amor
Please whisper my ardour
As you deliver its scent

Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love

Oh Zephyr
As a merciful favour
To an awaiting soul
Drift this luscious savor
To half of my whole

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2014

Author's Note

Thanks for reading! Please let me know how it is!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sensitive journey into the thoughts and places of love.
"Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love "
The above lines were my favorite. Even with distance. Love should expand. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot Coyote! I am very glad that you have enjoyed it! Your words of encouragement are very much appreciated!😊☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. You are a amazing writer.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you, Coyote! That is very sweet of you! ☺

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Raja,

It seems each time I visit you become sweeter and your journey in poetry delights the eyes of this reader.

Regards,
Al

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks you very much Al for your kind review!

[Deepika]

Lovely poem! though it took me a little effort in getting along all the words, I'm contended that I didn't miss out this! Cheers :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot Deepika!

[Benedict Mdluli]

I read it more than twice to understand finally I did I pray Zephyr brings to you the refreshing moments & those mild breezes you long for its just wonderful & the language too just got me engaged & attentive.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, Benedict Mdluli, for your useful feedback.

[Benedict Mdluli]

Its absolutely a pleja really enjoyed.

[Saddam]

Together, we rooted
These roses of amor
Please whisper my ardour
As you deliver its scent

Alone and away from home
Can you carry him hope
That the roses still bloom
So does our love

These two stanzas makes it perfect poem. Its like "chitthi Aae hai" wala feeling. Most amazing poem.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Wow, "Chitthi aae hai" - that is sweet! Thanks a lot SSADD! I am very glad that you have enjoyed reading this.

[Saddam]

You are welcome dear, It has special feelings.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

very well crafted... good one

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot Anurag!😀