Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

A Poem by Rajat malik
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Meeting someone special on her Birthday is just a different experience. Something which can't be missed out.

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As I saw her for the first time,
I knew that she was born to be mine
In her Birthday dress she looked like a cute Dove,
I wanted her to Bathe in the Shower of my Love
Her shiny face was making her look like an Angel,
She looked more Beautiful in the Red colored Bangle
Chocolate was what she loved the most,
But for now she was somewhere lost
'Hey are you All right'
'Ya! I just want you to become my Life'
'The Sun can stop setting but I won't leave you, I Promise'
'That's so sweet of you! But I think something is Amiss'
I quickly understood what she wanted,
She wanted a Hug that's what my Heart chanted
I quickly took her in my Arms,
And, slowly-slowly adored her never ending Charm
In no meantime our Lips were glued to each other,
Like they did it in the Movie 'Haider'
Few min. later I started singing 'Happy Birthday' song,
She Blushed and I understood that I have formed a new Bond.

© 2015 Rajat malik


Author's Note

Rajat malik
Here 'Haider' is the name of an Indian movie which is based on Shakespeare's play.

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Sweet piece. God bless :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thanks Mitu :)
The romance flows from every line of this write. How special to meet on her birthday! Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Oh!!! Thanks Lydi....
WoW!!!
so lovel dovey and mushy adorable poem...........
innocent honest heartfelt!!!!
very well rhymed.......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thanks again Pushkar......

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

always a pleasure bhai..........!!!! :) :)
Awesome write buddy! You got that romantic side shining through with these words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thanks Aaroon for your review and for lifting me up from ground.
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

No problem buddy :)
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Rajat this is great! It's sweet and mentions those crazy feelings we all get when we see someone we have a true passion for, good one! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Cutie pie......Glad that you found it great.
Hi Rajat.
A very positive and refreshing poem. You seem to be a hopeless romantic and am glad that you don't shy away from expressing it fully.
Like they did in Haider..haha...original
One thing I noticed...'In no meantime' should be 'In no time'
I liked reading it ....keep sharing your poetry. ☺

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Ya! Actually I Love Explaining Things.....thanks For Your Kind Review.....i Really Mean It by Heart
A positive and hopeful poem. I enjoyed the story and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

I am glad That you Enjoyed It.....i Am Very much Happy from Me......feels like Dancing In The Rain
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome.
WOW! The rhythm is WONDERFUL! I loved the story which this poem tell, it is very Heart-touching poetry. And Indeed it is LOVELY to meet someone special on their birthday!
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Hehe WOW I am really glad to hear this. I am very HAPPY for YOU! :) ^_^
Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Me too ....and all This Happened Due To You....Thank You Dreamer From The Every Drop Of Blood Flowin.. read more
Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

My Pleasure ^_^
that's romantic ,my bad if I cant give you any advice or comment for this but I know this is pretty good. Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot....Cladine
Your review is enough
very good poem Rajat, good flow and rhyme, excellent writing my friend :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mr. Richard

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Added on August 5, 2015
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Tags: Birthday, Dove, Cute, Hug, Kiss, Shiny Face, A strongest bond

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Rajat malik
Rajat malik

Shamli, U.P., India



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