Hard to forget

Hard to forget

A Poem by Rajat malik
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What if your Friend steal your Loved ones from you? What would you feel then? Of course you will feel neglected and much more. But what can be Done? Let's take a Tour of Poem.

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Because you are the Girl and I am a Boy,

Because you are the Pearl and I am a Toy

For you I have waken up myself whole night,

But you have just slept in your Quilt while holding it tight

Maybe I am right or maybe I am wrong,

For you Baby I have written a sweet song

If this is what was all your plan,

Then why you accepted me as your Man?

Loving you was easy but leaving you is hard,

Do you remember that day when I gave you a Card?

They say that Time is the greatest Healer,

But I have understood that it’s just a greatest killer

Because today also your memories Haunts me,

My Soul have crushed and it still taunt me

I have given up Hope and this is the worst thing,

I remember the Days when you wanted me to be your King

Without you my Life have become Hell,

Still I imagine you while ringing my Doorbell

If I wouldn’t have asked you to meet my Friend,

Then, I know, I wouldn’t have faced our story’s end

Faulty was I as I couldn’t see you both Flirt,

But at that Time I was busy in removing your Clothes dirt

As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,

I can still feel the Shower of your Reign.

 

© 2015 Rajat malik


Author's Note

Rajat malik
Please tell me the mistakes, I know there are a lot of Grammatical mistakes. I love Critics.

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Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,
I can still feel the Shower of your Reign."
Some people can steal our thoughts and mind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote.......Yes you are right some people can take away everything from us and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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can feel the lines.......its commendable..
.....poem doesn't count grammatical mistakes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Oh! Really. Thanx again. It mean a lot infact you mean a lot.
Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,
I can still feel the Shower of your Reign."
Some people can steal our thoughts and mind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote.......Yes you are right some people can take away everything from us and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is not bad at all. However, I think you should change "rain" in the last line to "reign", to reference the power she held while giving the line a double meaning. I also don't understand what you mean by clothes dirt, so think that needs clarification. Overall, its pretty good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Yes.....it's the dirt of clothes.....like lint i think......here it's called as dirt only.......that.. read more
Mari K

8 Years Ago

I see. Makes sense then
Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Oh....okay.......lol
i dont focus on the msitakes. you did a great job and i liked it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Thank you Dante :) Made my Evening
Not here

8 Years Ago

awesome :) i enjoy making peoples evenings or days or even mornings
Rajat malik

8 Years Ago

Hahaha....that's great :)
Don't worry about mistakes. You always learn from them and climb a step ahead. Keep writing :)

As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,
I can still feel the Shower of your Rain.



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much.....Mitu
great rhythm and poetry, a heartfelt poem my friend :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rajat malik

9 Years Ago

Really....Thankful to you

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Added on October 12, 2015
Last Updated on October 31, 2015
Tags: Love, Hate, Frustration, Neglected, End

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Rajat malik
Rajat malik

Shamli, U.P., India



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