Doll of my dreams

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She came in the school in her Green frock,

Making me stood still just like a rock

Her beauty was the one with whom even Angels can’t compare,

Maybe that’s why she wanted to fly in the air

She was neither a Celebrity nor a Rock star,

But I always wanted to spend some time with her in a car

I came back to the real world and looked around me,

For a glimpse of her everyone gathered just like a honeybee

She had a soft heart and a soft soul,

That was the reason everyone loved her just like a doll

For she was a Doll of my dreams,

I wanted to bathe myself in her Love’s stream

She looked towards me with her calm face,

Making me feel like I wanted to preserve her in a case

As usual our eyes met for a while,

And she passed me a sweet smile

‘It is the time’, my guts told me,

Somehow I managed to ask her for a tea

She sat in front of me with a blushing face,

 I didn’t wanted to leave behind any sort of trace

‘Happy birthday’, I wished her after placing my hand on hers,

I felt like I suddenly touched a fur

After thanking me she started dreaming something,

May be about us, when I would be her king

I wanted to propose her at that time only,

But I guessed at that time it was nice to be lonely.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Manish K Mishra]

Jst one word fir this sensational poem............"uncomparable"..soothing....

[Rajat malik]

Thank you sooo much bhaiya.....

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Your writing is stunningly beautiful, passionate, poetic, vivid and moving.

[Rajat malik]

Thank you very- very much SquinklaPsyOps. It means a lot to me.

[Amber Lily]

This is very sweetly written, I find poems like this adorable simply because all they do is complement one person. If whoever this was written for were to ever read this, no doubt they would feel flattered. Well done :)

[Rajat malik]

Thank you Amber. I suppose she would find it amazing.

[Scarlet Victory]

I honestly feel that this poem is well written. Everything flows together nicely and the poem was very sweet. I look forward to reading more of your poems. good job.

[Rajat malik]

Thank you very very much Scarlet......Lots of Love.........

[Scarlet Victory]

You are quite Welcome