Wilted music...

Wilted music...

A Poem by Candle in the wind
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Trying 6 word technique inspired by Phil....

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Fading melody

 

What is wrong....

Lost my song!

 

 Prized pain

 

Cherish pain....

Only gain

From ecstacy

 

© 2008 Candle in the wind


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this could easily be considered an introspective work of thought, reflecting the author,
because the wording so subtle that it seems a reflection, wilted music,
sadness overcome the heart, leaving the reader to draw their own conclusions,
i like the 6 word focus, seems to define the point in reason, well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Well...Raj, everyone gains from ecstacy, there is nothing like it and if someone could give me a word that outshines it...I would like them to tell me, a thought-provoking little piece of wonder xx
Cheers,
Helen :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant and thoughtful.................

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are pretty interesting.

I really like them.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a lovely meditation. Delicate and to the point. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

These are interesting. :)
I really like the thought in the second one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found your song! You didn't lose it after all. It was only hiding. Your writing makes me think and think again. Wonderful titles and tiny poems.

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Better and better .. be warned .. they are addictive !!! Smiling here .. I knew that you would take to them ....

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Perfect!!!! You have the idea ....

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Candle in the wind
Candle in the wind

Calcutta, India



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