Wilted music...

Trying 6 word technique inspired by Phil....

Fading melody

 

What is wrong....

Lost my song!

 

 Prized pain

 

Cherish pain....

Only gain

From ecstacy

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

this could easily be considered an introspective work of thought, reflecting the author,
because the wording so subtle that it seems a reflection, wilted music,
sadness overcome the heart, leaving the reader to draw their own conclusions,
i like the 6 word focus, seems to define the point in reason, well done.

[[untitled]]

Well...Raj, everyone gains from ecstacy, there is nothing like it and if someone could give me a word that outshines it...I would like them to tell me, a thought-provoking little piece of wonder xx
Cheers,
Helen :-)

[Michael W. Farrelly]

Poignant and thoughtful.................

[Floating on the feather..]

These are pretty interesting.

I really like them.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a lovely meditation. Delicate and to the point. Well done.

[Brenda Sue]

Very interesting. Great job.

[mattavelli]

These are interesting. :)
I really like the thought in the second one.

[None]

I found your song! You didn't lose it after all. It was only hiding. Your writing makes me think and think again. Wonderful titles and tiny poems.

[Phil Sanders]

Better and better .. be warned .. they are addictive !!! Smiling here .. I knew that you would take to them ....

[Phil Sanders]

Perfect!!!! You have the idea ....