Different Deluge

You walked in with the rain

The feather like drizzle

The breeze fringed with the spray

Of sprinkling showers

Your presence induced the heavy downpour

Walking or driving through the rain

Or just snuggling up indoors

Rain pelting on the window pane

Storm raging within

Whenever it rained there you were

Like a singing bird on my window sill

Filling my being with melody

The cool breeze with the fizz of raindrops

Wafting me or my thoughts away to you

 

 

Now when it rains those memories drift in

If I am alone

And then it is a different deluge

Which blurs my vision

Those moments dissolve and flow out

Reviews

[Carole]

I agree with Phil....This is delightfully written.

Whenever it rained there you were
Like a singing bird on my window sill
Filling my being with melody
The cool breeze with the fizz of raindrops
Wafting me or my thoughts away to you

This is comforting and brings with it such a gentle breeze, ministering to the soul. A nice write, as always-Raj! :-)

[Phil Sanders]

Delightfully written ....... a gentle poem ....