Brave Queen

Poetry prompt

"Your love,

       you must see --

   Marceen,

sweet dove,

  brave queen

 I'm but a boy,

    A cheap toy

     -- it cannot be."

Reviews

[Felix Soto]

with the quotations i believe some voice is telling the bold statement

[knowman]

Unique in every way!

[MustbeaFlower]

I agree with the others when stating that this poem is curt, yet seemingly a tale can be made with such words. Absolutely lovely. Anybody could create a story out of those words!

[mjmccabe]

I really like this structure. There are only 12 words between the dashes, but you've said so much more in just a few thoughts. It's very unique but i'll bet something so simple took a lot of thought in getting the words exact.

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sad really! But expressed so well!