Can I...........?

Tiny Cute Wishes........:)

You’re the daylight,

Can I be that first ray of light?

You’re the twilight,

Can I be that silent night?

You’re the falcate moon,

Can I be its silver line?

You’re the tempest cloud,

Can I be the rain?

You’re a vibrant rainbow,

Can I be one amid the VIBGYOR?

You’re a comrade with sky and sea,

Can I be the kiss of mist and glee?

You’re an open tome,

Can I be the lexis in it?

You’re a blossom,

Can I be its fragrance?

You’re a symphony,

Can I play it in thy empathy?

 

You’re a smiley curve,

Can I wear you on my lips?

You’re a dripping eye,

Can be a its tear of joy?

You’re a compassionate heart,

Can I be its beat?

You’re a perpetual love,

Can I be its essence?

You’re a pleasing pain,

Can I be its comfort?

You’re the trust and faith,

Can I be its vigor?

You’re a tender stroke,

Can I be its sense?

You’re a passion,

Can I be its delight?

You’re a magical tale,

Can I be its miraculous spirit?

You’re a day dream ,

Can I be the wishes in them?

You’re a charming prince,

Can I be thy princess?

You’re my complete life,

Can I be thy wife?

 

 

Reviews

[TrimarcoRansome]

wow! how could he not accept a proposal of this caliber?!! Well written

[Vani Jalagar]

I'm glad you like it :) thank you for giving your precious time :)

[Pradeep]

Wow, no words to express what i am feeling now and am blessed and honored to be ur in life and live along with you till my death... Few Lines that i wanted to express to you

When I met you,
I met my destiny.
My one true love,
You'll always be.


Instead of "you" and "I,"
Let's become "we."

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you :) I have nothing to say......nice words.....

[Pradeep]

Nothing to say ?

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Vani Jalagar]

:) your reviews always comforts my mind. thank you Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

My plea.:)

[Frieda P]

I don't usually like repetition that much, but it really works in this one, it's like the lyrics to a love song...who would dare say no?....

[Vani Jalagar]

I'm so glad you liked this one....Thank you Frieda...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

A lacy romantic write. From Alpha to Omega, you have covered it all. The adoration is intense in every line. Gentle and tender. This would be a splendid Valentine to give to your love! So, tell us, did he accept your proposal? So lovely! Lydi**

[Vani Jalagar]

Yea he did.....:) thank you so much for appreciation :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad he did! :)

[Tom]

You will never encounter a more sincere proposal to marriage that this, how could the recipient dare refuse such an enchanting offer ??

[Vani Jalagar]

:)...thank you for Kind review.....offer is been accepted :)

[Tom]

I'm delighted to hear that !

[Prritiy]

You’re the daylight,
Can I be that first ray of light?
.
.
You’re a day dream,
Can I be the wishes in them?
You’re a charming prince,
Can I be thy princess?
You’re my complete life,
Can I be thy wife?

I loved the longing, the passion, and the love the whole write portrays. liked it a lot.

best wishes

[Vani Jalagar]

Truly touched.....Thank you prritiy :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This has lots of questions in the lines...a bit difficult to read with the font...but you tell us a lot in 7 stanzas...

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you for review...yeah, every word means a lot to me..
I'm so sorry for you felt difficult to read.so now I've changed the font :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You use a strict format...so you are limited to changes...you use the identical...in each and every stanza...now that I can see clearly...hard to make adjustments to this one...was this an assignment of sort???

[Vani Jalagar]

I was bit unaware of font..not an assignment...what i felt just wrote it very freely..:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

As long as you're happy with it...that's all that matters...