Magic or an Illusion.......

Was that a magic or an illusion?

Was that a dilemma or a dream?

 

I feel so delighted and thrilled

You hold my hand tight with love

That instant I was lost in you,

Nobody to interrupt and distract,

Only me and you to interact,

 

Only four bulwark, I heard an echo

Loud as thunder storm “I love thee”

My heart flipped and flattered,

The flap was closed, you came near,

 I trusted you, hence had no fear.

 

One cuddle, a wave of magic was felt

Your breath was warm and pleasant

Placing thy head on lap you kissed,

Saying “I Love you”, now I’m blessed.

 

First kiss on palm, sign of esteem,

First kiss on brow, sign of care,

First kiss on lips, sign of passion,

First kiss on neck, sign of desperate,

You offered all kisses in a flash

 

No conscious and no control

I stood awestruck gazing at you,

How could anyone be so handsome?

How could anyone be so promising?

I lay my love on you the whole time,

 

I’m still floating in that sensation,

Was that a magic or an illusion?

Was that a dilemma or a dream?

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Sometimes it feels as though a dream, and it's amazing how fearless we can become when it comes to love at times. Think this is the first time I read 'bulwark' in a poem, unique choice for your illusion'd dreams here, nicely pen'd Vani. ;-)

[Vani Jalagar]

It's my pleasure to learn things from you mam.......you are inspiration to me :)

[Frieda P]

Awh you're sweet Vani, thanks muchly my friend...it's my pleasure to read you. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

One cuddle, a wave of magic was felt

Your breath was warm and pleasant

Placing thy head on lap you kissed,

Saying “I Love you”, now I’m blessed.

[Vani Jalagar]

:) I like those lines too......thank you for giving your time to serve my request :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

It was very romantic and i just loved the fluidity and flow of your thoughts......truely remarkable.......great work! Thank you for sharing!

[Vani Jalagar]

Blissful :) thank you

[Penny]

Very nyc poem & clever use of archaic words. I just fell in luv wid d stanza dat talked about kisses. And d repetition of title in last stanza ws remarkanle.. Thnx for sharing.

[Vani Jalagar]

Thank you for valuable words Penny....:)

[Penny]

My pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Best poetry ask questions and they give you the answer. You did. I like the flow of thoughts and the questions at the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Vani Jalagar]

glad that you liked it...Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

It could be all of the above...A splendid read and write...:)......................

[Vani Jalagar]

Hmmm.......Thank you so much Sami...I wrote this after a long gap..:)

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...You are welcome...:)....................