Fear

Fear

A Poem by Ranfer

Living   in   this    world   of    reality

Which   is    more    like   a   coward's   dream

Want    to   be    drowned    in   fear ?

Which   leaves   us   with   tears

Going   all    the   way   up   the   hill

Only   to    stop  near   the   top

Why   do   you   fear  

When   success  is  this   near?

Afraid    of    falling    down?

A   parasite   feeding   on  our   souls

Until   our   spirits  are    so    down?

That   we   can't   stand    again

Defeat   fear   little    by   little

And   build   your  spirit  day  by  day

Hoist  your  flag   of  success 

At   the   top   of  the  hill  with  pride

Stand   against   fear  which  is  nothing

But   a   shadow   of   one's   self

That   follows  you   behind  with   it's   darkness

© 2018 Ranfer


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Ranfer
Guys, you can tell me if it is not good. opinions, criticisms are all welcomed

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I am not positive as u think .I want to be
as described in this poem But it doesn't really bother me if I am afraid.
I see positivity in fear.but fear doesn't
stop me from doing things I am afraid of. I will try to get rid of it but if I can't I will live with it .but I won't let it win me

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

3 Years Ago

I agree. We are fighting with it but we have to live with it. Its with us. And you are stronger when.. read more



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I like this. And what you say is true. Fear can rule us and destroy us with we let it. We have to find the balance and put it in a box. And not let it control us all the time. We learn to live with it. And maybe one day understand why we are fearful. And conquer it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dawn

3 Years Ago

Dawn my real name and Dee was a nickname.
Ranfer

3 Years Ago

I thought Dee is your real name and Dawn your pen name😅
Dawn

3 Years Ago

Nope. Dawn
I am not positive as u think .I want to be
as described in this poem But it doesn't really bother me if I am afraid.
I see positivity in fear.but fear doesn't
stop me from doing things I am afraid of. I will try to get rid of it but if I can't I will live with it .but I won't let it win me

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

3 Years Ago

I agree. We are fighting with it but we have to live with it. Its with us. And you are stronger when.. read more
your approach towards dealing fear is much more positive, encouraging and fascinating as opposed to mine (i have written one on this title too)...that's why you are much more likely to be happier..:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ranfer

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review 😊

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Madurai , Tamil nadu, India



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A Poem by Ranfer