Phoenix

Phoenix

A Poem by Saurian Guardian
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A poem describing me and the state I was in earlier this year and how one young woman saved me.

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Drenched in rain with a broken wing

You found a bird with no will left to sing

He had lost hope his time was done

He had lost the world had won

 

But you picked him up as tender as could be

Because in his eyes only you could see

A glimmer of hope, one shread of faith

That hell and fire could not erase

 

So you took him in to make him well

Though at first he gave you hell

He hurt youand betrayed you as the world had to him

You thought that if anything his future was grim

 

But one day that bird who was nearly dead

Put down his foot, threw up his head

You gave him the strength to once again fight

He was no longer alone in an endless night

 

So as he caught fire and turned to ash

The small drab bird showed true beauty at long last

No more the broken bird does he remain

For you this phoenix does rise from the flame

© 2012 Saurian Guardian


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This is excellent! Raya has become an excellent friend to me and is really helping me out through my never-ending health and life struggle. It's great to have people I can count on and talk to. I'm kinda an introvert and i'm pretty scared of falling in love and I've been bullied constantly (guys phisically abuse me while girls talk behind my back) but I'm so glad I have my family. :)
Feel free to message me any time. :)
I say that to, like, everyone and I'm not a stalker, I swear ^^
Let's just say I'm getting left behind by my real friends but I'm making as others on this site. :)
Again, great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, and I sadly know how it feels to be left behind by your friend, you even need to .. read more
Felicity's Eve

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, and thanks ^^
Message me anytime



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I absolutely enjoyed this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Phoenix... nice

I hate Phoenix as a Lakers fan, tho, but that's my sports side coming out

Posted 7 Years Ago


well penned variation on a common theme. blunt, yet beautiful. full of casual realism and yet, laced with fine imagery and cobbled with clever metaphor, excellent write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Oh my god thank you so much :)
quinfinn

7 Years Ago

;)
This is excellent! Raya has become an excellent friend to me and is really helping me out through my never-ending health and life struggle. It's great to have people I can count on and talk to. I'm kinda an introvert and i'm pretty scared of falling in love and I've been bullied constantly (guys phisically abuse me while girls talk behind my back) but I'm so glad I have my family. :)
Feel free to message me any time. :)
I say that to, like, everyone and I'm not a stalker, I swear ^^
Let's just say I'm getting left behind by my real friends but I'm making as others on this site. :)
Again, great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, and I sadly know how it feels to be left behind by your friend, you even need to .. read more
Felicity's Eve

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, and thanks ^^
Message me anytime
A glimmer oh hope
one shred of faith... Well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Well....this reminded me of Harry Potter a bit XD But all in all this was an amazing poem. It was dicriptive and well written. It's amazing. Keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem (: Excellent job! It is absolutely amazing! Fantastic work! I'm glad I picked you up again,and taught you to fly,and rise from the flames.(:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thanks baby
 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

You're welcome (:

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Saurian Guardian
Saurian Guardian

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Hi, Im Damien. Im currently a student from Ontario with a passion for art and poetry. Ive also written a few short stories and plan on continuing my writing as the year progresses. I love designing .. more..

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