Monsters

Monsters

A Poem by Saurian Guardian
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This is how I truly feel, behind the smiles and laughter Im as dark as they can get.

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Death, blood, carnage and war
This is what they're fighting for
My demons, my darkness, my inner hate
Are almost too much for me to take 

They are strong, they are fierce, they are ready to fight 
Terrifying beasts with a darkness of night
Gnashing teeth and shredding claws 
Bloodied fangs set in savage jaws

The embodiment of pain, suffering incarnate 
Inside me is just too full of hate 
Not one bit of light can penetrate a night
Darker than shadow, where nothing is right

Can I feel love? I know I feel pain
In my heart, in my brain
These monsters, these demons, these creatures from hell
From underworld once in my soul now dwell

No hope today, no hope for me
One day they will all see
My true colours, a wretched beast
Upon the world shall be released 

© 2012 Saurian Guardian


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This made me smile. This is truly epic! This is a scary war scene. I can get how this is horror poetry, but it also describes an inner war of emotions too. Thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thank you :D
David the writer

7 Years Ago

No problem, brother ;)
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is really good. I think we all have our monsters inside wanting to get out :)
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
There yeah go. Amazing once again. And now....I have reviewed it like I said I would muahahaha

Posted 7 Years Ago


Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Felecia

7 Years Ago

No problemo :D
Very powerful and raw. DExcellent work,Very emotional. And even though you have this side to you, I love you all the same. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. (: I think you secretly seek forgiveness,refuge and peace..
Saurian Guardian

7 Years Ago

Yes
 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

I know you so well XD

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Added on September 18, 2012
Last Updated on September 18, 2012
Tags: monster, inner self, death, blood, pain, agony

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Saurian Guardian
Saurian Guardian

Canada



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Hi, Im Damien. Im currently a student from Ontario with a passion for art and poetry. Ive also written a few short stories and plan on continuing my writing as the year progresses. I love designing .. more..

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