Me and my friend- Just Crazy!!!

Too crazy to know we are crazy!- Me and my friend

Chatterbox you call me,

Gossiping nonsense,

I call you a crack,

And you hit me a whack,

I go all crying,

And you come manofying,

Calling me crazy,

We move lazy

Without You,

I am Low,

With You,

I don't care if we are low!

Author's Note

This one is written and dedicated to my best friend- Siri Shree and some more friends like Vidya and Nehu on IF, Kiran, Chakri, Himanshi and so on! Do tell me how it is.

Reviews

[Bear]

You misspelled Manaofying and I don't think many people from the USA will know what that word means but they should get the idea :~)
Fun poem, but where most of your poems have a strong impact ending this one was kind of weak, by that I mean you ended the last four lines by repeating the same two words. Still I enjoyed reading it, thanks for inviting me.

[Rainslover]

I'll just change it! I guess I can't remove the word, that's the one that fits in.
Its just that I wrote this one for my best friends! Will try to write a good one next time!

[Bear]

Don't bother to change it, just keep in mind how good your vocabulary and deliver the killed ending we know you are capable of on the next poem :~)

[Rainslover]

Will surely do!

[Beth Lindsay]

I really like this poem and can easily relate to it.

[Rainslover]

Thank You! Glad that you can relate to!

[Emily]

I love this one!!
Keep it up!!

[Rainslover]

Thank You! Glad you love it!

[CalvinnTay]

I can sense that you both are not friends, you both are like family to me. Both of you share a bond that cannot the severed. I can see it in your poem. Thank you for an enjoyable poem. I will be reading more of your work soon.

[Rainslover]

Thats true! Siri is like my family! From past 6-7 years we are best friends and infact I never feel home as someone else's home, I live there like my home and even our moms treat us that way!Lol.
Thanks! Glad you could enjoy it! :)