Yes, I am that stranger.

if you're reading this, it's too late.

I hope you remember me, I'm the stranger who made you smile day by day, the one who never got tired of making you happy.

I'm the stranger who took care of you and made sure you're fine everyday, the one who used to call you every night to hear your voice.

I'm the stranger who loved you more than anything, the one who never forgot about our anniversary.

I never wanted you to leave, In fact I did every possible thing to make you stay. We had a connection, a bond, like you're metal and I'm a damn magnet.

I'm the stranger who used to mean the world to you, the one who loved your naked soul before your naked body. 

Heartbreak, such a staggering end. You didn't break my heart, you ripped it into a million pieces; watched me bleeding and did nothing about it. You saw my soul evaporating infront of you and it didn't make you sad.

It was the end of us.

I am that stranger who's still writing about you, a message that you will never recieve.

-Rassoul 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[JPDonelan]

That was pretty good. The piece does well to build up a sense of unhappy departure, and a continued longing on the part of the narrator.

That said, the piece also reminded me of why I tend toward writing somewhat dark pieces. Not very far in to the reading, I realized that much of these could also be played off from the perspective of a stalker, or someone overly infatuated with another (which may still be true). Certain lines, of course, did well to put distance between the two possible perspectives (the one you used and the one I denoted here).

Due the piece's more poetic, monologue-like styling I don't have much to provide in terms of constructive feedback. Anything that I could come up with has already been addressed by others.

[Rassoul]

Thank you so much, review appreciated.

[Donicca Dona L]

I'm the stranger who used to mean the world to you, the one who loved your naked soul before your naked body.
Heartbreak, such a staggering end. You didn't break my heart, you ripped it into a million pieces; watched me bleeding and did nothing about it. You saw my soul evaporating infront of you and it didn't make you sad.

beautiful beautiful beautiful.
I rated it 100 if I could I would have rated this 100000 . simply because it so touching and beautiful

[Rassoul]

Donicca, I really appreciate your words. You're such a great writer, thank you so much.

[pia]

I can relate to this.
I am a stranger to the person who was once my best friend for the past 8 years
Its really sad when times like this comes
And this story is something i think everyday.
Thank you for writing this

[Rassoul]

Pia, thank you so much for your review!

[Vic]

Though I can't personally relate to this, you do a great job of showing the emotion and experience associated with losing someone that wasn't invested in the same kind of relationship.

[Rassoul]

Thank you so much, Vic.

[Praveen kumar]

Heart melting message may be that someone could read this..........

[Rassoul]

Thanks for your review.

[Praveen kumar]

you deserve that

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Allahuakbar....
and may your sadness turn into happiness soon..insha Allah!....good work rassoul

[Rassoul]

Thank you so much, Wajiha!