Cyber Stalker

Cyber Stalker

A Poem by Raven Starhawk

Midnight’s dismal smoke interlaced about me

Discarded and somnolent I linger along a beaten path

As I listen to a spiteful connoisseur

Whose annotations are a haunted whine

And enthralling my reservations like a felony

She materializes to embezzle my song

In her haughtiness she advocates how I am erroneous

Mistaken about what though?  I dare query

My question’s retort was an arduous chore

For words stuck in her throat like rotted meat

And I realized compassion was her enigma

As her individual was a contaminated filament

While she stalks in world of cyber

© 2012 Raven Starhawk


Author's Note

Raven Starhawk
Have mercy with this. I wrote it when I was very tired and worn out physically, mentally and emotionally. UPDATE: I have edited it a little bit, but realize it needs more work. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented! I also made it not rhyme so much. XD

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Whether you rhyme or not your work never fails to give the reader a magnificent read. This is wonderful as it is!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well crafted and it is SO powerful in strength! Great description of bully and cruleity!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your vocab,good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cyber stalking! Yes this describes it! Its cowardly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the raw emotions here...great :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well crafted piece regarding those who seem to have no life but bully others on the web. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very well crafted work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


my friend this is a great poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think this is really good! It maynot be your best but its good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i've read worse. at least you're willing to experiment.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2012
Last Updated on October 23, 2012
Tags: stalker, troll, bully, angst, deviantART, depression, writing, poem, poetry


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