Cyber Stalker

Cyber Stalker

A Poem by Raven Starhawk

Midnight’s dismal smoke interlaced about me

Discarded and somnolent I linger along a beaten path

As I listen to a spiteful connoisseur

Whose annotations are a haunted whine

And enthralling my reservations like a felony

She materializes to embezzle my song

In her haughtiness she advocates how I am erroneous

Mistaken about what though?  I dare query

My question’s retort was an arduous chore

For words stuck in her throat like rotted meat

And I realized compassion was her enigma

As her individual was a contaminated filament

While she stalks in world of cyber

© 2012 Raven Starhawk

Author's Note

Raven Starhawk
Have mercy with this. I wrote it when I was very tired and worn out physically, mentally and emotionally. UPDATE: I have edited it a little bit, but realize it needs more work. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented! I also made it not rhyme so much. XD

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Whether you rhyme or not your work never fails to give the reader a magnificent read. This is wonderful as it is!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Well crafted and it is SO powerful in strength! Great description of bully and cruleity!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love your vocab,good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Cyber stalking! Yes this describes it! Its cowardly.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I like the raw emotions here...great :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Well crafted piece regarding those who seem to have no life but bully others on the web. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very well crafted work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

my friend this is a great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I think this is really good! It maynot be your best but its good.

Posted 10 Years Ago

i've read worse. at least you're willing to experiment.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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12 Reviews
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Added on September 16, 2012
Last Updated on October 23, 2012
Tags: stalker, troll, bully, angst, deviantART, depression, writing, poem, poetry

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