Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Celestial Truth

Celestial Truth

A Poem by Raven Starhawk


Believe in the demon you create
Across Armageddon's territory
Beady onyx eyes observe
Every mistake
Every choice
And ultimately the road you travel
Will forever be infested
With twists and turns
One can become lost
Not all can be found

© 2012 Raven Starhawk


Author's Note

Raven Starhawk
Eh, fairly basic poem without cryptic stanzas.

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Oh damn girl.. "One can become lost..not all can be found".. Wow.. I love reading you because there's always a punch.. and for me that was it. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


This fits the way I have been feeling, you delivered a well written poem. I enjoyed this very much. You are always able to elicit feelings of some sort from me and that is exactly what good writing is supposed to do. great work once again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This looks like art to me. Like you've inked up your page perfectly :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another sublime poem, not as cryptic as usual but I love it, cause I get
the point conveyed and a great message it is.

Great stuff :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice! I admire your expression in words. Always tangible in their approach. Leaves me wandering and dwelling in places new :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


There are layers to be discovered here, as always in your writing. If only i had the mind to analyse your thoughts, my friend .. but i'll leave knowing i'll be back to re-read, to think. To discover my own demon!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 11, 2012
Last Updated on December 22, 2012
Tags: life, angst, poem, poetry, belief, hope, dreams, choices, friendships, hardships


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