Explain

Explain

A Poem by Raven666

Explain

You say you love me

But I don’t know why

You say you want to date me

But I can’t see why

You say you want to spend the rest of your life with me

But why would you

You give me all these gifts

And I try to hold back my uncertainty

You love me

But it's hard to love you when I don’t understand

Explain it to me

Why

Please just explain.

© 2010 Raven666


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Hi,
This is really good except I think you are missing a is bewteen it and hard. But other than that is really good. Good Job. Keep writing!! Keep it up!! Kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Raven666
Raven666

Viroqua, WI



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My name is Jena. I have an older brother and five pets named Coco(my rabbit), Shadow and Raven(my two cats), U-Neek and Lena(my two dogs). I love sotfball and soccer. My parents are happily married.. more..

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