Precious Life

Precious Life

A Poem by StayAnchored
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A girl from my church/grade decided to end her life last night and it was really laid on my heart to write a poem for her. I didn't "really" know her but the pain is still there :(

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You left this world and took your life

With a slash of a sharp "knife"

 

You will be missed

Because of a slit on your wrist

 

Your life was precious

A gift from God

You have prayers from abroad

 

It didn't have to be this way

You could have sat and quietly prayed

 

Yet you ended it anyway

 

People shed tears from the thought of not having you near

 

You are with Jesus as anyone can see but you left an impact on my friends and me

 

 

© 2013 StayAnchored


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ohhhhhhhh :( feel sad for you and it is normal like sometimes you find yourself being hurt by someone's passing who you didnt know more than that you knew from A to Z.
nice dedication, if only she was still alive or in a coma to read this, she might have completely changed course of her fate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Please pray for her family!
luviva

10 Years Ago

i will definately do :D
n you are welcomg



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This poem is very moving. Whenever somebody around us commits suicide, it always affects us, even if we didnt actually know the person. I'm sorry for your loss.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
This almost makes me reconsider my coping methods. Sweet poem and I'm sorry that you lost what could have been a potential friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

9 Years Ago

Thanks, means a lot right now!
It is never easy when you lose someone, even if you didn't know them well. Everyone makes an impact on someone else, whether you know it or not. Thank you for sharing this piece Lillie. You wrote it well and I am sure the girl you wrote it for appreciates it even though she is no longer here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

It has definitely been hard but God will work it out! :)
Thanks
praying for you and her family! i'm so sorry for your loss

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
marie

10 Years Ago

no problem:)
ohhhhhhhh :( feel sad for you and it is normal like sometimes you find yourself being hurt by someone's passing who you didnt know more than that you knew from A to Z.
nice dedication, if only she was still alive or in a coma to read this, she might have completely changed course of her fate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Please pray for her family!
luviva

10 Years Ago

i will definately do :D
n you are welcomg
Aww that's so sad =( it breaks my heart when one decides to take their own life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

Mine too! I cried :(
Silhouette

10 Years Ago

I'm so sorry =(
awe that's sad to hear...wonder why she ended it. It's always sad to hear things like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

We don't decide that, only God knows what was in her heart. We can't say who makes it or not...we ca.. read more
StayAnchored

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
She didn't end her life with a knife but I used it symbolically... :"(

Posted 10 Years Ago



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