Jesus Christ

Just a quick 5 minute poem. I know it isn't great but it's just a thought! :)

You came down
And took the blame

You bore my crown
And wore my chains

You took the cross
And died on the tree

All of this brings me to my knees

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

When You're praising the LORD it is like tears and just as we are crying out
our LORD always wants to hear us and it is Beautiful Because it is about out
Awesome and Big God.



He Sings upon your heart and in your soul
it seems my young friend always stay close to
him and know he always loves us and you're speaking
your heart it is a beautiful write I love to read anything
like this your work is becoming my favorite I love it thank you.



Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.


I am listening to the news boys it is a Christian band
music are a good inspiration and being out side in Gods beauty.




Have a lovely and blessed night. Blessings. kindred poet

[StayAnchored]

Thanks a lot! Music and God's creation is an amazing way to be inspired indeed! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Yes very much so his bible is good for that too :) You're very welcome. it's my Pleasure always. I enjoyed reading. blessings. kindred poet

[Kieta!]

So beautiful and so true! Thank you for writing this :)

[StayAnchored]

Thank YOU for reviewing it! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

A nice tribute to the greatest man to ever walk Earth----Jesus Christ!
I believe you did an excellent job, when you wrote this in a five minutes. Most of mine do not turn out successful when I attempt that. I am a little particular and I like to have everything set right. The rhyme scheme, flow, title, and the message blows me away. Keep writing and posting!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :)

[Erik Daniel]

Once again a very simple and yet very beautiful poem. Great job!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! I appreciate your reviews :)

[Erik Daniel]

And I appreciate yours!

[ZeniaK]

This is beautiful. I'm a christian, too, and I loved this!

[StayAnchored]

That's is awesome! Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ This is really nice, especially since it took you 5 minutes to write. I like the flow of it and it speaks truth. I think before people can come to Him, they must first understand what He did and feel it in their hearts.

Good Job

[StayAnchored]

Thank you!
And I agree with you :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome ^^