Happiness

Happiness

A Poem by Soul Fire
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Doesn't really rhyme but enjoy!

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Happiness is key. But where is the key? It feels like it is hidden.... Is it only accessed when you are in love? Happiness is key,it is inside you and me. Happiness is capable,if you decide it to be. In order to be happy,you must decide to be happy.. No one can make you happy.. You do not need someone to be happy.But its nice to have someone to be happy with. Happiness does not come from others,it comes from within ourselves. We have to find it within. We are the key to our own happiness. We decide our own fate. We decide on our happiness or feeling like crap... We decide to stay up or take a nap... The key to life Is creating your own happiness... It's within yourself... No one can access it but you yourself...!!! Doesn't come from little elves... It comes from ourselves...!!

© 2012 Soul Fire


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Pax
happiness for me is a very vast topic to write.
maybe because happiness can be little things or big things.
happiness is contentment..of what you have..but humans being human..we
tend to look for more..then comes greediness. which is hard to swallow.
i disagree with this lines somehow:
You do not need someone to be happy.
Happiness does not come from others,it comes from within ourselves.
~maybe because a soul always has a other half no matter who or what and that makes a soul complete and find contentment with it(soulmate). usually the key is in our other half.
this is only my point of view.
otherwise great viewpoint made me think.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Yes I did :D
Pax

7 Years Ago

can i share with you the questions i came up with...im still writing it down? would you, its about y.. read more
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I like your viewpoint. I agree that happiness comes from within. Too often we depend on other people for different emotions, feelings. People have a tendency to give our power to the people we interact with; we need to remember that the power is all ours and how we react.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Thank you
I like that, it's very cute, and it carries a powerful message. For a moment it was almost tounge-twisitng, but that just added to the effect. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

thank you
Hmm i really like this. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Thank you
SmileBig :)

7 Years Ago

Np
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Sam
Great poem, I don't really care that it doesn't rhyme- It's still an awesome poem. :)

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 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The key to life
Is creating your own happiness...
It's within yourself...
i totally agree with this part of the poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Pax
happiness for me is a very vast topic to write.
maybe because happiness can be little things or big things.
happiness is contentment..of what you have..but humans being human..we
tend to look for more..then comes greediness. which is hard to swallow.
i disagree with this lines somehow:
You do not need someone to be happy.
Happiness does not come from others,it comes from within ourselves.
~maybe because a soul always has a other half no matter who or what and that makes a soul complete and find contentment with it(soulmate). usually the key is in our other half.
this is only my point of view.
otherwise great viewpoint made me think.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Yes I did :D
Pax

7 Years Ago

can i share with you the questions i came up with...im still writing it down? would you, its about y.. read more
 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Sure.Message me them
Beatiful poem, who cares if it doesnt rhyme! Well written and descibes the emotion perfectly. I liked the first stanza the most.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) I love your little bird poem
Broken Soul

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, and thankyou :o

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