Perfection

Perfection

A Poem by Soul Fire













Society says alot of s**t.

I just hope you know that they're full of it.

You are perfect just the way you are.

Adding makeup,looking at your eyes,checking out your thighs,
believing their lies hurts you,little star.

You do not need to believe the lies they have convinced.

Even though stupid lies are so easily believed.

Society's view on perfection is unrealistic.
Don't listen to them.
They're sadistic.

Do not listen to them.
Your happiness is at stake.
Do not let them take it away.

You are beautiful,
inside and out.

One day you will figure that out. 

Perfection is imperfection.

Don't let them take your true self away from you.

Start being the true you today!
That they can never take away!

© 2012 Soul Fire


Author's Note

 Soul Fire
Hope my message comes across.(:

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I love this poem and its great. u should check out my poem "Letter to keira KNightley" its a comedic version of this poem :)

yes society is crazy. Marylin Monroe would be consider fat if she was alive today. she was a beauty back then. she would be fat now. great piece

im glad im stuck in a starbucks in the rain so im forced to read my RRs :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I've already read your poem.



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A very powerful message. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you very much! :D
It really did! I have been inspired, and I am sure many others are too! 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Wow, this is such a beautiful message that you have spoken right here! I almost started crying since I sadly agree with society's way of beauty. Which now I know that it's full of crap and this poem made me realize. They think that for a girl to be truly beautiful she should have blue eyes, blond hair, super skinny, and tall. Which I'm not any of that except for tall xD Haha. But I'm proud to be who I am and I accept myself that's what matters the most. I'm unique just like everyone else. I'm one of God's creations and if someone has a problem with that, then they truly have some issues. Haha!! I'm perfect yeah, at being imperfect 100% of the time. I hope every girl on this website and potentially over the world will soon one day read this poem and realize the same ideas that I have while reading this! Beautifully written, and adding to my library for sure!!:))

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

9 Years Ago

Yeah sure :)
 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thnx :D
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

9 Years Ago

Welcome :)
The message certainly gets through, but it feels very much like a stream-of-consciousness, especially at the end. It could use some refinement. For starters, try a common phrase or note that's strung through. That little bit of consistency will unify the piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
parts of it, like 'looking at your thighs,checking out your thighs,' i think are a little unnecessarily repetitive... but other than that i can totally imagine this becoming into a song

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

oops that was a spelling errror....oppsie wrong word ill fix it and thnx
A wonderful message, and co-incidentally someone always complains about her thighs to me lol

Great poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thanks :D so much
Love affirming write , imperfections makes us grow dig deep and beauty is who you are rather then what society dictates or the physical.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you
Thank you! you are very beautiful, too! :3

Great message to send out there!

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you
such a great write .....i love the message ....well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you!

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 Soul Fire
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