Perfection

Perfection

A Poem by Soul Fire













Society says alot of s**t.

I just hope you know that they're full of it.

You are perfect just the way you are.

Adding makeup,looking at your eyes,checking out your thighs,
believing their lies hurts you,little star.

You do not need to believe the lies they have convinced.

Even though stupid lies are so easily believed.

Society's view on perfection is unrealistic.
Don't listen to them.
They're sadistic.

Do not listen to them.
Your happiness is at stake.
Do not let them take it away.

You are beautiful,
inside and out.

One day you will figure that out. 

Perfection is imperfection.

Don't let them take your true self away from you.

Start being the true you today!
That they can never take away!

© 2012 Soul Fire


Author's Note

 Soul Fire
Hope my message comes across.(:

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I love this poem and its great. u should check out my poem "Letter to keira KNightley" its a comedic version of this poem :)

yes society is crazy. Marylin Monroe would be consider fat if she was alive today. she was a beauty back then. she would be fat now. great piece

im glad im stuck in a starbucks in the rain so im forced to read my RRs :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I've already read your poem.



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The mesasge comes across beautifully! Great Job! Alot of young girls and boys should read this and take inspiration from it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you so much!!
Photo gave life to the poem. A wise person don't rate another life. Never what they done and lived.
"Perfection is imperfection.
Don't let them take your true self away from you."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
Good job.love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you
Aw very beautiful. Loved it. Like how you expressed feeling and used imaginary in your poem. Hope this review helps. And if you could I be so happy if you could review some of my work. Thanks and have a wonderful day. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Joseph and yes I will.Have a wonderful day :)
Joseph Aldridge

9 Years Ago

:)
Aww this is so beautiful! I Lovd it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

thank you so much :D

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 Soul Fire
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