Phsycadelic Candy Cane

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Mimi's in a cage in a rat infested shed
Mimi wonders what it's like to not be dead
Mimi pulls at her shackles But they seem to get tighter
So Mimi kills a rat and makes her cuffs lighter
The rats blood slickens the shackles bet her hands now seem infected
Mimi's sad now so she gets to work on choosing her selected
She chooses to hide out in her diseased hovel
Her family, now worried sick, take her cage to a professional talking marvel
The marvel opens her scull and dazes her with mind altering candy canes
The candy first tasting sweet, then starts to rot until she gets used to being in a state of blaze
Mimi starts needing more candy to balance her mental scale
Little did she know her candy was poison and she was waking from her daze with a demon on her tail
She forgets her candy one day and the demon consumes her mind
When she finds her candy cane the demon regurgitates her because she was in too sweet a bind
Mimi now has no hovel but she still has a cage
All she has to do is get out and face her ordered day

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[An owl on the moon]

You paint this one with such vivid colors. Here there is a darkness hovering, yet this dreamish trip awakens a world of emotion, a soul hungering for freedom.