Life

Being optimistic can change how you live your life.

Life, an unforeseen tale

A Shadowy, intrepid trail

Brimful of trials and tests

Never fixed, not having rest.

 

A wheel of uncertainty

And of wondrous beauty

Ever hurting, ever grinning

Dilemma; inspiring, defacing.

 

A stage of bittersweet

Fine-tuning apiece of actors

With wine and water

What a breathtaking performer.

 

A superior pedagogue

Of lessons in an epilogue

Making mortals impervious

Sage and vigorous.

Reviews

[Kittenincake]

"A stage of bittersweet
Fine-tuning apiece of actors
With wine and water
What a breathtaking performer."

Great flow here, love the 1st and 3rd line relating to food/drink with the other lines referring to entertainment. Reminds me that life is a work of art that should be admired thoughtfully.

[Ray Gal]

Thanks! Yes that's exactly the thought of the lines. Thanks for the feed.

[Kittenincake]

No worries

[Saud Maroof]

My favourite lines
"A wheel of uncertainty
And of wondrous beauty
Ever hurting, ever grinning
Dilemma; inspiring, defacing."

Your poem was gentle, it encouraged optimism. You delivered a calm impression of a very mysterious phenomenon i.e life.
Thank you for sharing
I will be waiting to read a story or an essay from you.

[Ray Gal]

Thank you. This inspires me more to write. Just wait and I'll publish a short story or essay. Feel free to suggest a topic and I can write a poem, essay or story about it. Again, thank you!

[Saud Maroof]

no problem.