Guide me

Help me please
I beg to you
I don't know what else to do
feeling so blue
I'm just a fool
trying to make it trough
this maze called life
I'm so amazed inside
inside my mind
I crave to find
a dozen rhymes
for a dozen lines
in the darnkess,
may you be there to guide me to the light.
I feel so hurt
I feel so lost
if there is a price on love and happiness,
then what is the cost?
but no, dam lord I'm just so broke
to me this whole thing is like a joke
but that's just me
thinking crazy
I need to give in to you and just believe
that you'll guide me to where I need to be.
to my destiny.
just help me please.
tears are rushing down my face
I feel like a disgrace
to my mother every day
it's about time that I begin to pray
or say all I need to say
before it gets too late
and I can't no more
because I'm feeling so alone like nobody being home
guide me now,
because I don't know where to go..

Reviews

[Jem Sagcal]

This was written so beautifully. It conveyed honest emotions and a poem is always a pleasure to read when the writer puts his heart into it.

[Raymond Collado]

Yes, Thanks a lot