California Koan - Healing

I knelt by those moving waters  

felt the remnants of the rain 

their fall from the tips of the pine 

and I breathed in a rainbow   

inhaling the future  

exhaling the past  

and though I was on my knees 

this was not a prayer 

but a song 

of healing 

copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

[patricia]

their fall from the tips of the pine ...with eyes like Robins to see, moments normaly go unnoticed like these, you call our attention to them and enrich us for the better.
Those last three lines are for me our future and what we can do in the power of now.
Loved it Robin.

[luciddreamer]

Simple pleasures abound

[writing mojo]

i have been at these moments before and the internal weather you describe can last only as long as their is eternal human nature

[asdarkeyesclose]

'and though I was on my knees

this was not a prayer'

you see the world with such powerful vision that we are left nodding and agreeing, delighted by your perspective of life. fantastic.

[Lilly Negoi]

inhaling a rainbow of possibilities :) lovely music!

[Aidz]

Class .....

Bravo

[Robin]

Thanks Mate

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I know that song of healing, I have been singing it for awhile now........let us hope we keep breathing in rainbows. Beautiful Robin

[Robin]

in a world where one truly believes hope and faith are only words that remind . breathe deeply and keep singing Neva

[.]

as you know, in aboriginal cultures songs of healing were the only prayer...

may many hear your song!

[Robin]

I know that you do , much appreciation of your words

[rabbit]

Beautiful--it takes me away so simply.

[Robin]

such is the purity of meaning , thank you