The Journey

The Journey

A Poem by Robin
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~*~

"
I am a poem

of the eternal light

that intangible light

that light I know so well



captured in moments

tearing through the clouds

the gift of just one sunbeam

to pierce the shadows



and I know you know ...

as I sit in here in the silence of the day

as it engulfs me ~ being

feeling you across the distance 


I hear the rain

I move toward the sun


alone






copyright 2013 Robin Christopher Amaral 
image copyright Dulce Costa  , used by permission 

© 2013 Robin


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captured in moments


something any writer would love.

nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and in that moment, you are suffused with the knowledge that you too are the light
and that moment...gives fuller definition to the word freedom

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And always there should be that movement towards light..even if we're crawling towards our light.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not bad. You use some great imagery in this, and the ending is very nicely done. Perhaps a little cliche with 'alone' standing alone, as it were, but you've earned it, I suppose. One note - there were a few too many 'light's in the first stanza for my taste. A little too repetitive. Other than that, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

And in that moment everything catalyzes to do your heart's bidding.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

such are the moments , such is the heart , thank you my Friend
one little sunbeam, one little anything, is precious if seen and appreciated; as
always, a wave of the wand in the night, '...the gift of just one sunbeam ~
to pierce the shadows .. '

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your ray of light Emma
This divine spark from the heart of being lifted my spirit and the lines,
"as I sit in here in the silence of the day
as it engulfs me ~ being" moved me to the depth of my own being.
Exquisite.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

Happy you see the light in my words ~
this little light of mine :)

i'm gonna let it shine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

:)

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