Mariposa de sombra

Mariposa de sombra

A Poem by Robin
"

for Devi ~

"
Mariposa de sombra ~



sentir el baile 

la luz de felpa 

entre las cintas de sus brazos 

mente arrojados

a la liberación 

del amor







copyright 2013 Robin Amaral

© 2013 Robin


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i'm not a native spanish speaker...something about dancing to the beat of the lights, in your arms i'm determined to set our love free...i know i'm probably so off, but there's actually vivid imagery here. the title is lovely. this is the first time i've seen a spanish poem here. it's great you don't put a translation to it, it leaves for greater interpretation. inspires me to post one of my spanish poems. excellent job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

I like your interpetation , thank you



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me gusta! ah so beautiful, spanish is a language of romance in your masterful pen.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Una mariposa o polilla precioso, baila en su luz, supongo que más se necesita! querida poesía y excelente.

- EliLau, gracias! xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. I was used as a translator in Honduras. I study Spanish for three year in High School. Good to be lost in the freedom of love. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

You always see with a poetic eye my friend , good to see you again
I don't speak Spanish and put this piece into some translation software. From what I read, I see a butterfly dancing along and the agent sees love being echoed through the butterfly's wings. This is a beautiful piece no matter how its translated.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

thank you Kenneth , you feel the elements of this poem - catharthis , freedom , love
Kenneth The Poet

8 Years Ago

Not a problem, Robin.
i'm not a native spanish speaker...something about dancing to the beat of the lights, in your arms i'm determined to set our love free...i know i'm probably so off, but there's actually vivid imagery here. the title is lovely. this is the first time i've seen a spanish poem here. it's great you don't put a translation to it, it leaves for greater interpretation. inspires me to post one of my spanish poems. excellent job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

I like your interpetation , thank you
'and dance you in the naked night'

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

8 Years Ago

Bailar amigo

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