Fat Man

Fat Man

A Chapter by Robin
"

object at rest ...

"

 

 

Fat Man with remote

sits comfy in his hollow

couch sighs not again

 



© 2011 Robin


Author's Note

Robin
Senryu , a form similiar to Haiku , a satirical look at human nature

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I was married to a man who spent ages looking for batteries for the remote whilst bemoaning the fact he was missing his programme. I didn't bother to wonder why he didn't just get up and turn it over by the button. I just carried on watching whatever I was watching. :) In our house we call the remote the 'wand.' This should have a pic of Homer with it, Robin. My review is officially longer than your poem. Hehe, I am USELESS at reviewing haikus and senryus.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Hey! Is it wrong to love your remote?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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i've been trying to make a haiku or a senryu but the words wouldn't fit :(
and this senryu reminds me of my cousin :P
"not again~" :3

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I was married to a man who spent ages looking for batteries for the remote whilst bemoaning the fact he was missing his programme. I didn't bother to wonder why he didn't just get up and turn it over by the button. I just carried on watching whatever I was watching. :) In our house we call the remote the 'wand.' This should have a pic of Homer with it, Robin. My review is officially longer than your poem. Hehe, I am USELESS at reviewing haikus and senryus.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha~ i think everyone can relate, i wonder how many times i have said those words "not again" in my lifetime and how many times I will continue to say it in the future. hard habit to break huh.. lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol i know this man... a comical look at the life of some..

Chloe

Posted 8 Years Ago


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not like the former grunting lifestyle of three channels and no remote eh? another precise picture.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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lollll, right, "not again" :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is funny from the couches perspective.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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really sharp :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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guilty me..lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


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