Fat Man

object at rest ...

 

 

Fat Man with remote

sits comfy in his hollow

couch sighs not again

 

Author's Note

Senryu , a form similiar to Haiku , a satirical look at human nature

Reviews

[Narnie]

I was married to a man who spent ages looking for batteries for the remote whilst bemoaning the fact he was missing his programme. I didn't bother to wonder why he didn't just get up and turn it over by the button. I just carried on watching whatever I was watching. :) In our house we call the remote the 'wand.' This should have a pic of Homer with it, Robin. My review is officially longer than your poem. Hehe, I am USELESS at reviewing haikus and senryus.

[Moonflower]

this is witty and hilarious, but almost sad. Well done

[Brad]

i'm glad i waited around for this one...i have a simular, not haiku by any means...called "fat americans"

[Ed Hart]

skinny minnie too
reaching for the other shoe
wonders what to do

[Dream Weaver]

Clever!!! Sad but true...

[David W Moore III]

remains at rest...
interesting picture.

[emmajoy]

depression - too long in seat, bound by unseen must sit or else?
depression - down too far for safety, can't move?

full of wayward thought, brings a smile then a frown, unsure

[loowzerX]

how very creative. i like!

[paul]

interesting. totally unique.. and brilliant