Sparkle

its simple really

that sunny day

 

we knelt together on our treasured beach

 

seeking moonstones and opals ...

 

and between my finger and thumb 

 

I held a grain of sand

 

and let it sparkle before your inquistive eyes

 

and watched it quietly, slowly

 

glisten into a memory   

 

Reviews

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you are a sorcerer
completely lovable

[Desert Dreamer]

Even a grain of sand contains great wonders.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

love the images.. little things mean so much and some of my strongest memories are of 'little things'.. I do love opals and moonstones -

[arbitrary jane]

ah, to walk a beach of glistening memory-sands. each grain a life, a moment, and also an infinity.
blake would lend an 'amen.'

[Quinn Blackburn]

breathtaking, splendid wordcrafting! pulls the reader into a quietly memorable moment. wonderful work!

[AlieahRose]

OOO...
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL...
I LIKE THE WAY YOU...
WRAPPED A MEMORY...
INTO SO LITTLE WORDS...
GREAT JOB ROBIN...

[joe shmo]

pretty poem i like this :)

[Lilly Negoi]

some of the most beautiful things in life are simple - if we allow them to remain that way :)

[Ladysue]

Sparkle..great title and exactly what this piece does...sparkle...beautiful and a pleasure to read...I loved it...

[Lachenille Papillion]

it really is...