Seeds

Seeds

A Chapter by Robin
"

California Koan

"

 

I lay on that rock

 

feeling the sun on my face

 

as the ponderosa climbed in perspective 

 

I listened to the wind run

 

through its branches

 

a stirring of chance

 

a cone fell to the ground

 

in that moment

 

a beginning



© 2011 Robin


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Gorgeous! This piece brought back the memory of the overwhelming scent of ponderosas in the California sun... the blazing summer sky seen through those gently sighing boughs... wonderful wordcrafting, feels like a moment ripe with potential. well done, Robin!

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reminds me of when I'm down on the Gulf Coast in Galveston chilling on the beach

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is just gorgeous Robin. I love the reflective quality of these nature inspired poems. A treasure trove of brilliant little jewels for me to savour.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Beautiful - always good to know there is a new beginning.
This is lovely nature poetry. Lying on a warm rock hearing the wind is a peaceful feeling - reading.

Chloe

Posted 8 Years Ago


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brilliant !

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The beginnings of life born on a breeze.

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Death of one for the life of another>> The Circle of Life!
Such a deep meditative mind you have>> Read your poetry helps me keep all that is in life in perspective>>

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Yeah. U are one hell of a poet. aren't you? How good is this..just the right thing to say ..it's is poetically and practically correct..I love this..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I wonder how many people ever notice this, the moments of quiet beginning... they're all around us.

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And all that falls, can allow and embrace a new beginning! Love, I think the image of the wind running is fabulous! Breathtaking! xx

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