Metaphoria

Metaphoria

A Poem by Robin
"

l'imagination

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mindrack twisty cell game

 

point to point needlesque ah ha's

 

squeezy fit to fit tricky winks

 

slinky glance eye touche giggle

 

daydreamer parfum cirrus-curiousity

 

scented love-a-delic scandalicious

 

puckersweet lemoncake whisper bites

 

skin glaze watsu dreamswimming

 

pick-a-petal wishblooms - pink

 

flipflop shiatsu macadamia

 

crunchy pop pop happysnaps

 

smilebig fingerverbs oilgliding 

 

yumfun palmglide starsparkle

 

mmmmmmmmm ...

 

your purring 
   
 


 

 

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Copyright © 2006-2011 Robin Amaral


 

© 2012 Robin


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isn't it grand when there aren't enough words in the english language to capture a moment? when we need to break all the molds and forge our own speak...
also... i couldn't explain why, but finding 'macadamia' in here was like fishing through a chest of gold doubloons and coming across the hope diamond.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I love your fascination with words. You create some very good ones, not only delicious but memorable. Thanks Robin.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These here are magic words...sent my mind inward, into my own imagination.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Nice writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "Anguish and She"
God bless you!
Lucky!

Posted 8 Years Ago


My my how juicy!!!! :D I love this!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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love the use of language here..clever and intelligent

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hah this had some amazing word play throughout, you can tell how delicately crafted each line was. Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol...that was a trip for sure...some of those combinations reminded me of JW a bit...made me smile and think of how I miss her presence on this site. This one made me happy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I've long believed that language came from an urge to be self, and not from books or hearsay, not from example or expectation .. seems you've proved me right!

' .. daydreamer parfum cirrus-curiousity .. '

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This happens every time I make margarita's with the blender....
Giving shape and expression to impressions and experiences there are no words for.

Very individual, very personal, very intimate.
Are you sure you're not related to Jack Kerouac?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Robin, I do believe you have created your own language and it is delicious!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Tags: mind massage, mental elasticity, words stretched, verbal bliss

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