F**k You

F**k You

A Poem by Rebbie Louise

I refuse to be belittled 
While you plead your innocent part 
crumbling to ashes from your words
They've cut me too deep not to scar

how can you be blind to the pain
you've been causing me for so long?
you've been the reason for my demise
I blamed myself for all you did wrong

I refuse to let you win this time
I will not throw away my morals too
to win your sick and childish games
I'll keep strong and rise above you.

© 2012 Rebbie Louise


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f**k you..
I blamed myself for all you did wrong...

glad you finally realised... this is a strong piece filled with raw anger

Posted 7 Years Ago


You came out strong with this. I imagine you'd written this while you were mad. Anyway, awesome piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very heartfelt and honest. I am glad you could rise above the situation

Posted 8 Years Ago


very inspiring

Posted 8 Years Ago


go and rise from your pain. your a strong person.

Posted 8 Years Ago


great write very powerful

Posted 8 Years Ago


i can relate to this very well done keep up the work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wooow..well done..the pain is nicely described..optimism flows over all...the strength at the end of poem is wondrful..:D..great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's a little bit wordy but it's all your style. Nice job! It has a very clear point and the words are enough to pack a punch without being too eccentric. Thanx for writing ^.^

Posted 8 Years Ago


we waste our love on people who don't deserve our love. we like to believe that people we love share the same feelings or at least admit they dont care. but some people are just callous. its a brutal dark world. people just don't care about the feelings of others.

great piece

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2012
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Rebbie Louise
Rebbie Louise

Atheist , United Kingdom



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I'm Rebbie. I live somewhere in the back of beyond in good old Great Britain. I love to write, anything from poetry to stories. I also love politics, and no that does not make me boring, sly or anyt.. more..

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