All that I am

All that I am

A Poem by Rebbie Louise
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I haven't written any poetry in a while...you can tell

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I'm a leaf,
with fall two weeks away

I'm the sky
sometimes blue, sometimes grey

I'm the rain
drenching us from above

I'm everyone
who's ever fallen in love

I'm the sun
shining over all you do

I'm the blade
cutting these scars into you

I'm the desparation 
in your voice asking me to stay

but I am myself
and now I must walk away

© 2012 Rebbie Louise


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Wow very powerful and meaningful poem. I really.liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wonderful ending! Painful but lovable! 100/100 Amazing work! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Like the ending. Powerful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Laurierose
Poet at heart. Romantic by nature. Nature the style. Styled by experiences. Experience this world that is my mind...
I love the transitions. Smooth. So glad you're back!

*desperation

*But - the rest are capitalized. I know they are all I or I'm but... Eh. Personal preference maybe. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Rebbie Louise
Rebbie Louise

Atheist , United Kingdom



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I'm Rebbie. I live somewhere in the back of beyond in good old Great Britain. I love to write, anything from poetry to stories. I also love politics, and no that does not make me boring, sly or anyt.. more..

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