Damn, I love you.

Damn, I love you.

A Story by Rebbie Louise

There are so many good things I could say about you. Millions, in fact. However, the most important things are these which I will write in this letter to you. The things that I love about you. 

I love the way you're impossibly proper, in your speech, in your dressing, in your attitudes. I love how you always laugh at me, when I intend to be funny, even if I'm not. And while we're on the subject, I love the way you laugh; Throwing your head back, and your mouth wide open. I love the way you hold the door open, and pull the chair out, and even help me down the last step of the staircase. I love the sparkle in your eyes, when you tell me you'll love me eternally. 

All of that is incomparable with the thing that I love most about you. I love the person I am when I'm with you. When I'm with you, my problems don't exist, how could they? they mean nothing when I look at you. I have no right to be unhappy when you're in my life, and so I'm not. You are the only person in the world who's ever seen the real me, because you're the only person I can really be me with. 

I love you, not only for who you are and all you give to me, but who you make me, because you make me the best version of myself. 

I love you, eternally.

© 2012 Rebbie Louise

Author's Note

Rebbie Louise
I haven't written for a while and this is the only thing I could come up with, but it's my feelings so...yeah

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Very sweet

Posted 8 Years Ago

Rebbie Louise

8 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Added on November 8, 2012
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Rebbie Louise
Rebbie Louise

Atheist , United Kingdom

I'm Rebbie. I live somewhere in the back of beyond in good old Great Britain. I love to write, anything from poetry to stories. I also love politics, and no that does not make me boring, sly or anyt.. more..