Without You

Without You

A Poem by Solitary Dreamer

     Everything hurts inside. Without you I feel nothing. When we are together, laughing like we used to, evevrything feels right again. Yet, when she comes around you change your course. I don't know when and I dont know how but one day we will be together again, reunited hand in hand.

     When that day comes it will be happiest day of my life.. but until then i will have to keep living my life without you..

© 2010 Solitary Dreamer


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Solitary Dreamer
This is my first peice of writing.. read and and tell me what you think.

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Yea... same, but girl as your friend i'm here to say HE, depending I know who he is, isn't worth the ground you walk on. He broke your heart and will do it again, but the writing he made you write is wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good job :) sorry about the sad feelings though :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweetheart, I was there when you felt that. I know your pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this and now exactly how you feel.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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